Thursday, October 18, 2007

Informal Writing II






¡Hola Snr. Cardona!

No puedo dar bastantes gracias por lo que ha hecho para mí. Gracias por arreglando la entrevista con Kaiser Permenente. Hace un día era la entrevista. Fui muy nerviosa sobre la entrevista, pero la fue muy divertida. Las preguntas no estuvieron difíciles y el entrevistador estuvo cómico. La entrevista terminó en una hora y media. Ellos dijieron me que llamarán me en dos días para resultados. Estoy preacupado. Si recibo el trabajo, yo trabajaré con una enfermera de niños, Clara Moreno. Mañana recibiré los resultados y usted será la primer person oir las noticias. Otra vez, muchas gracias por su ayuda


----Karina----

2 comments:

karina said...

Name:
Karina

Date:
10.18.07

Assignment:
Informal Writing #2

Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.
yes

I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.
yes

I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.
yes

I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
yes

I try to make my writing interesting.
yes

I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.
yes

I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.
yes

I make sure the sentences relate to each other.
yes

I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.
yes

If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.
no

I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.
yes

I check my spelling.
yes

I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).
yes

I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).
yes

I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.
no

I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).
yes


What I think I did very well on in this assignment:
i think that i organized it well

What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:
i need to have one check it before i poste it

karina said...

i can't understand it, but at least picture explains it.